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take pictures

watchvideos

listen to music and stay in touch with your friends and families. Theseare some of thefeaturesthat drive the iPhone popularity in countries. But how about using your iPhone to control a Parrot AR.Drone

a wifihelicopter with two cameras? Think of the gamesyou could play with that!瀏覽網路

拍照片

看影片

聽音樂以及和你的親朋好友連絡

這些都是一些讓IPhone流行於世界各地的商品特色。

但是該如何運用你的iPhone去控制一個海盜AR.Drone

一台載有兩個相機的wifi直升機？想看看你會玩到那樣子的遊戲麼！

How it worksThanks to its self-created WiFi

the AR.Drone canbe controlled by either an iPhone or an iPod Touch.Moving your iPhone or iPod Touch turns the quadricopterand guides it forward or backward. Direct it to go up or down with buttons on the iPhone or iPod touch. Do nothing and it will hover in place.他是怎麼運作的多虧它的自創WiFi

可以不須經由iPhone或iPod Touch控制AR.Drone。

經由移動你的iPhone或iPod Touch去轉動和引導quadricopter往前或往後移動。

用iPhone或iPod Touch上的按鈕操作它上升或下降。

不做任何動作的話它則會在一個地方上下起伏。

What it can doMost video games can be played while comfortably stead on your couch playing themoutside would be out of question. Playing with the AR.Drone however

compelsyou to be actives. Take it outside

and raceothers around your neighborhood. Fight giganticrobots and aliens

or destroy other drone with the multiplayermode. Finally a video game won’t make you a couch potato.它能做什麼玩大部分的電玩都是舒適地坐者或者躺在躺椅上。

而在室外就不太可能了。

但用AR.Drone來玩的話

卻迫使你要動起來。

把它帶到室外和你的鄰居們一同競賽。

和巨大的機器人與外星人打鬥

或者再多人連線模式摧毀其他的Drone(無人駕駛的飛艇機具)。

到最後電玩遊戲不會讓你成為一個couch potato。

1.Surf......... and stayin touch with your friends...... Buthow about using your iPhone to controla Parrot AR.Drone

ahelicopter
P..a....r.....r....o....t ...=鸚鵡.P..i.....r.....a....t....e ..=海盜..**out of question**.=毫無疑問的.out of the* question =不可能
Most video games 大部份的電玩遊戲can be played可以被玩while而 comfortably 舒適地stead取而代之on your couch 在你的躺椅上玩playing them outside would be out of question.=可以玩大部份的電玩遊戲

而且既使不在你的躺椅上舒服地玩

在戶外也毫無疑問的

可以很舒適地玩

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